Breakthrough

I push you with full strength

from inside my cocoon,

you roll me down full force

from inside yours, both waiting

till we break-

through and rise

to get a higher view of what

was always our ground

that now

we can better cherish

as its gravities

can hold us down no more

for we gave each other wings.

4 thoughts on “Breakthrough

  1. Aniket Thakkar

    And I thought, between the two of us, I’d be the one who wrote sappy stuff. This is very well written, and tightly woven. It’s like you’ve achieved a big break-
    through. 🙂

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    1. Shivani Ahuja Post author

      Hehe.. thanks.. honestly, I was quite surprised at the outcome upon writing this one.. 😉
      And sappy… lol… it is not very easy to be so, i guess, but I believe if one can be sappy in writing then half the work is already done.. and you are more so, definitely; in a good way of course. 🙂

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