I push you with full strength
from inside my cocoon,
you roll me down full force
from inside yours, both waiting
till we break-
through and rise
to get a higher view of what
was always our ground
that now
we can better cherish
as its gravities
can hold us down no more
for we gave each other wings.
I love that last line, wings to fly and soar, very nice
Oh this is wonderful, especially your closing line. Wonderful!
And I thought, between the two of us, I’d be the one who wrote sappy stuff. This is very well written, and tightly woven. It’s like you’ve achieved a big break-
through. 🙂
Hehe.. thanks.. honestly, I was quite surprised at the outcome upon writing this one.. 😉
And sappy… lol… it is not very easy to be so, i guess, but I believe if one can be sappy in writing then half the work is already done.. and you are more so, definitely; in a good way of course. 🙂